Inner Monologue or no inner monologue?

I always enjoyed reading what frustrations Peter parker had to vent about his life as he beat the pulp out of his villains.



Here's a way to differentiate this Spider-man from the last two iterations. Introduce monologues.



Imagine the juxtaposition of Spidey beating up a chump like the Shocker while he bickers about his private life. The contrast of what he does and says could be opportunity for a lot of great humor.